Participation Thread | Anniversary Contest #2 - Create your Apex Hero

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  1. gumi Elie

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    This is the Participation Thread for "Anniversary Contest #2 - Create your Apex Hero". To read all details about the contest, click here!

    Not respecting the Rules of Conduct of our forum, or any of the rules and requirements listed below, will disqualify your entry.

    No discussion is allowed here.
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    You are free to edit your message as many times as you like until June 12 2017, 10:00 CEST.

    Good luck to all participants!
    - The Brave Frontier RPG Team​



    Français

    Ceci est le Sujet de Participation du "Concours d'Anniversaire#2 - Créez votre Héro Apex". Pour lire tous les détails du concours, cliquez ici !

    Ne pas respecter les Règles de Conduite de notre Forum, ou une des règles ci-dessous, disqualifiera votre participation

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    Vous êtes libre d'éditer votre message autant de fois que vous le souhaitez jusqu'au 12 Juin 2017, 10:00 CEST.

    Bonne chance à tous les participants !
    - L'équipe de Brave Frontier RPG​



    Italiano

    Questa è la discussione in cui vanno inserite le proprie partecipazioni per "Concorso Anniversario #2: Crea il tuo Eroe Apex". Per leggere tutti i dettagli sul concorso, clicca qui!

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    Buona fortuna a tutti i partecipanti!
    - Il Team di Brave Frontier RPG​



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    Dies ist der Teilnahme-Thread für "Wettbewerb zum Jahrestag #2 - Erstelle deinen Apex-Helden!". Um alle Details über den Wettbewerb zu erhalten, Klickt hier!

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    Viel Glück für alle Teilnehmer!
    - Das Brave Frontier RPG Team​



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    Este es el hilo de participación para "Concurso de aniversario #2 - Cread vuestro héroe Apex". Para leer todo los detalles de este concurso, haced click aquí.

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  2. DarcFury

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    Lore

    7#
    Flaming fist ludwig

    Cornelious little cousin and leader of cornelious ground forces. Cornelious was almighty at sea but needed help from his cousin took take over the world. He send Hanzel out to take on his will on the landside. With the help from his cousin Hanzel gaind a lot of known, and became as feared and merciless as his cousin is.

    De
    rift captain ludwig

    During the war cornelious gave an important task to Hanzel. Find me more power! Hanzel with his followers took one of coenlious boats and set sail to the unkown. After some years at sea the suddenly fell of the earth! Into a dark place with portals all around. At this mysterious place Hanzel got alot of weird powers from worlds and demensions that none had seen before. Yet these are rumors cause none had seen him after the moment he set sail.


    Art i
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    Explain unit:
    Monkey shapshifter
    Monkey like martial artist.
    Just like cornelious is a fighter
    Cousin because shapshifters is all about famili trouble
    Evil in quest of power.
    Fire cause of reasons
    Monkey... ape... apex?

    Dream evolution could have bionic eye, gorilla shapshift, anything he get from other worlds
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  3. Rexion

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    En español:

    Este personaje se llamaba Rex pero cuando obtuvo el poder de abrir portales paso a Kairex.
    Nacio y crecio como principe en el mundo de Rexion heredero al trono de uno de los 7 reyes supremos, sus poderes eran de agua pero al entrenarse mucho tiempo con su padre obtuvo el poder de hielo.
    Un dia formo un equipo para explorar el mundo hasta que conoció a Yon y a Rexion y se unio a ellos para derrotar a 8 de los 10 Dioses supremos que amenazaban al planeta, antes de luchar contra el Dios Destino, Rexion le dio una esfera de poder que contenia el poder de crear portales y unirlo a sus poderes de agua y hielo. Pero ocurrió algo terrible y era que Kairex traiciono a los demás activando una trampa hiriendo a todos menos a su hermano Garrik, los dos pelearon hasta que Kairex estuvo apunto de derrotar a Garrik pero Garrik uso su ataque final y le dio a Kairex.
    Kairex se levantó y no sabia que ocurria, ahí se dieron cuenta que Destino le estaba controlando, Kairex y su hermano se enfrentaron a Destino ya que eran los que estaban bien y lo derrotaron.
    Despues de muchos años de batalla derrotaron a los Dioses supremos y a los demonios que crearon y Rexion al recuperar sus poderes de Dios supremo le dio la opción a Kairex a que buscara otros planetas que esten amenazados con el poder de crear portales. Él se lo penso ya que tenia que heredar el trono de Rey supremo de su reino, su hermano le dijo que podia dejarle el reino en sus manos si queria cumplir sus sueños. Kairex aceptó y se marcho a otros mundos en el cual aparecio en un lugar donde todo estaba amenazado y conocio a un pequeño llamado Tazer.
    Tazer estaba en peligro y Kairex le salvó del demonio que le atacaba, Tazer lo admiraba y queria que lo ayudara aprender a luchar. A Kairex le encantaba eso de que le llamaran Maesto Kairex y se dispuso a enseñarle.
    Tazer logro aprender todas las técnicas de agua que conoce Kairex aunque Tazer siempre creyó que esa era todo el poder de su maestro ya que derrotó a un Dios supremo solo con sus técnicas de agua una vez pero luego al dia siguiente Kairex se marchó a otro lugar dejando una nota a Tazer donde decía que el era libre y que ya era lo bastante poderoso, lo que le faltaba tenia que aprenderlo solo.

    In English:
    This personage was called Rex but when it obtained the power of open portals happened to Kairex.
    Born and raised as a prince in the world of Rexion heir to the throne of one of the 7 supreme kings, his powers were water but by training long with his father obtained the power of ice.
    One day I formed a team to explore the world until I met Yon and Rexion and joined them to defeat 8 of the 10 supreme Gods who threatened the planet, before fighting against the God Destino, Rexion gave him a sphere of power Which contained the power to create portals and link it to its powers of water and ice. But something terrible happened and it was that Kairex betrayed the others by activating a trap by hurting everyone but his brother Garrik, the two fought until Kairek was about to defeat Garrik but Garrik used his final attack and gave Kairex.
    Kairex got up and did not know what happened, there they realized that Destino was controlling him, Kairex and his brother faced Destino as they were the ones who were well and defeated him.
    After many years of battle they defeated the supreme Gods and the demons they created and Rexion in regaining his powers of supreme God gave Kairex the option to look for other planets that are threatened with the power to create portals. He thought of it since he had to inherit the throne of supreme King of his kingdom, his brother told him that he could leave the kingdom in his hands if he wanted to fulfill his dreams. Kairex accepted and went to other worlds in which appeared in a place where everything was threatened and knew a small called Tazer.
    Tazer was in danger and Kairex saved him from the demon attacking him, Tazer admired him and wanted to help him learn to fight. Kairex loved that they called him Master Kairex and set out to teach him.
    Tazer was able to learn all the water techniques known to Kairex although Tazer always believed that it was all the power of his master since he defeated a supreme God only with his water techniques once but then the next day Kairex went away to another place Leaving a note to Tazer where he said that he was free and that he was already powerful enough, what he lacked he had to learn alone.

    His name: Kairex the portal traveler.
    Kairex.
    Apex Kairex Master of the portals.

    Mundo: cualquier mundo de la fosa.
    World: Any world of the pit.
    Edad:A partir de los 23 años el dejo de cumplir años por un problema temporal de su mundo que lo causo un Dios supremo.
    Age:From the age of 23, he stopped celebrating his years as a temporary problem in his world that caused him to be a supreme God.

    Este lore concuerda con el lore del pasado de Tazer.
    This lore agrees with the lore of Tazer's past.

    Frases de Kairex:
    Si no fuera por Rexion yo nunca hubiera obtenido este poder.
    Echo de menos a mi padre y a mis dos hermanitos.
    Me encantaría que Tazer viniera conmigo aunque el debe escoger su propio camino.
    El mundo de El Gaia necesita mi ayuda.

    Kairex Phrases:
    If it had not been for Rexion i would never have obtained this power.
    I miss my father and my two brothers.
    I would love Tazer to come with me even though he must choose his own path.
    The world of El Gaia needs my help.

    Armas:
    La espada acuática cambia formas.
    La garra fuente de sus dominio de la magia de agua y hielo, en su interior se haya la gema que le dio Rexion.
    Portales que puede invocar por la gema de Rexion.

    Weapons:
    The water sword changes shapes.
    The claw source of his mastery of the magic of water and ice, within it is the gem that gave Rexion.
    Portals that can be invoked by the gem of Rexion.

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  4. Drachenlor

    Drachenlor [5] Veteran

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    Name: Drachenlor
    Description:
    -Name: mad traveller Jeremy
    -Comes from earth
    -Element: Dark like his mad soul
    -He´s a damage-dealer
    Story:
    Because of the third-anniversary-convergence-event, Jeremy, a huge Brave frontier fan & player of the game since day one, joined the game to play the new dungeons.

    But it wasn´t as easy as Jeremy thought, he wasn´t strong enough and lost control.
    Faster than he could recognize it, he got swept up into the world of Brave Frontier,
    where he is now travelling and cutting his way through the individual worlds of the Rift.
    Because of his look, the creatures he fights with underdestimate him and with every battle his power and madness increases.
    The goals he is fighting for are the right ones, but his methods are just mad!

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  5. Sciado

    Sciado [8] Elite

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    Unit:
    It: Singhàl Apex furibondo
    En: Enraged Apex Singhàl

    Esp: Singhàl Furioso Apex
    De: Wütend Apex Singhàl
    Fr: Singhàl Furieux Apex

    Lore:
    (I'm sorry but due to important issues i can't write it in English)
    Estratto dall'istituzione archeologica della Nuova Repubblica

    Il clan di Enki non fu l'unico ad essere sterminato, il clan degli Ubaid cadde infatti per mano degli stessi assasini. Gli unici resti di questo clan sono riportati nel registro dell'Arena:
    "Singhàl, Guerriero Ubaid. Venne catturato assieme ad un secondo schiavo e portato nelle catacombe sotterranee dell'Arena per poter lottare in nome di Re Gilgamesh.
    Vinse innumerevoli scontri assieme allo schiavo dall'animo nobile e vennero costantemente accostati per le loro differenze, Singhàl era spietato e facilmente irritabile mentre Enki era calmo e caritatevole in combattimento.
    Un giorno, i due vennero schierati l'uno contro l'altro, in palio: la libertà. La lotta fu cruenta e nessuno dei due dimostrò pietà nei confronti dell'altro, dopo diverse ore le forze vennero meno e Singhàl non potè far altro che tentennare dinanzi alla carica possente di Enki, che sembrava rinato e carico più che mai. Aprì la mano e lo colpì al petto con una forza sovrumana, Singhàl si sentì trafitto al petto da mille pietre affilate e, ormai al suo ultimo respiro, disse "Эҳтиром ба афтода, раҳм ғолибон". Enki uscì vittorioso mostrando a tutti il cuore del suo avversario e tornando nelle catacombe, un importante incontro lo attendeva.."

    Se Singhàl avesse vinto, molte cose sarebbero andate diversamente, il Clan degli Ubaid sarebbe rinato grazie alle affluenze dei restanti clan, la stirpe degli Uruk avrebbe certamente trovato un terreno meno fertile e Re Gilgamesh sarebbe probabilmente caduto, sotto le armi degli stessi clan che tentava di sterminare.

    Artwork:
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    Singhàl_170517_0001.jpg

    Full Artwork

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  6. Nushica

    Nushica [3] Experienced

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    -Unit-
    •Name: Interdimensional Apex Yurika
    •Element: dark
    •Lore: ( I have a bad english , sorry)
    following words were in a diary:
    Admission: 001
    Wake up ... wake up hungry and dying alone ... in my mouth felt a taste of metal. My blood was my blood everything was destroyed ... I was lying on the ground I moved my right hand and noticed that something changed. My arm had disappeared replaced by a metal one. I try to remember what happened, but there is nothing. I try to remember who I am, but there is nothing.I realized that I was in the ruins of a laboratory out of there and I realized that I was in a world devastated by the people who inhabited it. Disgust ... I was disgusted because of them thousands of innocent people died ...
    Admission: 01X
    I have found people seem to have a base but I will not approach them. I do not want to meet anyone.Input 02X:Some monsters attacked me. I thought they were going to kill me but a purple light came out of my robotic arm. When I realized the monsters were not there. Scared I ran for what had just happened I did not understand, it was not possible that happened. Try to invoke another portal but .... something even stranger happened.
    Input 03X:I have not written in a while. It seems that I have socialized with the little creature that came out of my first portal. He says his name is Tim-lim. This crazy guy says I'm his pirate and he's my captain. It seems he lost his family long ago. Also I was able to create a weapon that is connected to my arm so I can invoke my portals faster and control them better.
    Input: 3XX
    Everything .... everything will be destroyed ... I have traveled through all the portals .... a great danger is coming and I can not do anything .... they do not remember me ... I can only see how it happens the Story .... while my presence fades
    Las siguientes palabras se encontraban en un diario deteriodado por el tiempo:

    Entrada: 001
    desperte...desperte sola hambrienta y moribunda...en mi boca sentia un sabor de metal. Mi sangre era mi sangre todo estaba destruido...yo estaba tendida en el suelo moví mi mano derecha y note que algo cambio. Mi brazo había desaparecido lo habían reemplazado por uno de metal. Intento recordar que paso, pero no hay nada. Intento recordar quien soy , pero no hay nada.

    Me di cuenta que estaba en las ruinas de un laboratorio salí de alli y me di cuenta que estaba en un mundo devastado por las propias personas que lo habitaban. Asco...me daban asco por su culpa miles de inocente murieron...

    Entrada: 01X

    He encontrado a gente parecen que tienen una base pero no me acercare a ellos. No quiero conocer a nadie.

    Entrada 02X:

    Unos monstruos me atacaron. Creia que me iban a matar pero una luz purpura salio de mi brazo robotica. Cuando me di cuenta los monstruos no estaban alli. Asustada me fui corriendo por lo que acababa de pasar no lo comprendia, no era posible que sucediera eso. Intente invocar otro portal pero....paso algo aun mas extraño.

    Entrada 03X:

    Hace tiempo que no escribo . Parece que he socializado con la pequeña criatura que salio de mi primer portal. Dice que se llama Tim-lim . Esta loco de remate dice que soy su pirata y el es mi capitan. Parece que perdió a su familia hace tiempo. Tambien pude crear un arma que esta conectada a mi brazo asi podre invocar mas rapido mis portales y controlarlos mejor.

    Entrada: 3XX

    Todo....todo sera destruido...he viajado por todos los portales....se avecina un gran peligro y no puedo hacer nada....no se acuerdan de mi...tan solo puedo ver como pasa la historia....mientras mi presencia se desvanece.
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  7. Copper

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    Official Entry:
    Apex Technomancer Ash :dream:

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    Link to full size image: https://postimg.org/image/j4bqtfsnb/

    Lore:
    Before the Bad Lands events took place, Blink was just an extraordinary girl with a unique affinity for artifacts and technology. People like her were extremely rare and held unlimited potential, that's why Coal Cauldron decided to go after her. He kidnapped Blink, extracted and enhanced her genes with his own to create the perfect being able to achieve the full tech-affinity. The toddler was very weak at his birth, so Coal had to incubate him artificially with the techs provided by Cobalt, the only other person that knew about the child. One day Blink, exhausted and scared, managed to flee and set up a resistance to end up Coal Cauldron's reign of fear; but her child was still there, in the enemy's headquarters.
    After Plumatachi, the only one who loved her despite the fact she was violated and tortured, had her revenge she proceeded to gain control of Coal main base. What she found was a little, weak, sleeping baby attached to a huge machine. She had no clue he was Blink's, but driven by motherly instincts she took care of the creature as if he was her own son.
    Plumatachi set up a new alliance called the "Nova", of which she and few other people were in control. Ash, the now well-grown child, showed incredible strength and potential throughout the years: he was so affine to the Bad Lands tech that he could even remotely control them - weapons, vehicles, machinery and so on. His powers granted him a spot among the heads of the alliance his foster mother created. He was so powerful that Cobalt - who wanted to take over the Nova - was scared to face him.

    But one day Ash disappeared.

    He was chosen to represent his universe in the rift convergence, since he was by far the most powerful person in the Bad Lands. The reasons behind the call, though, are still unknown.
    With Ash banished from his own universe Cobalt could've taken his chance to overrule the alliance, thanks to the techs he scavenged throughout the years and the help of his best buddy Crash Belt. If only Ash didn't vanish in the void he could've easily rule the Bad Lands thanks to his tech affinity, make civilization happen and a new era arise. Bad Lands would've finally known peace and prosperity under his guidance.
    WIPs:
    First iteration of the character
    https://s29.postimg.org/6lwr2omfb/WIP0.png

    Shaping some more things up
    https://s12.postimg.org/xlglh539p/Sneak_Peek1.png

    Trying some clothes on him, not really liking the results
    https://s15.postimg.org/b58rf2j17/Sneak_Peek4.png

    Actually I like him more with naked torso, looks 100% more badass
    https://s22.postimg.org/3zxb9emy9/sneakpeek6.png

    Going for the pants now:
    https://s23.postimg.org/c5kqwdegr/sneakpeek8.png

    While working on them i thought that low-crotch-trousers would totally fit both the theme and the line of movement. I really like this design decision, they give him a very unique silhouette.
    https://s24.postimg.org/448gdsjet/Sneak_Peek6.png

    Since the new silhouette works pretty well, I dediced to remove the gas mask. It IS pretty cool but I feel like that's more of a Coal Cauldron thing, and I don't want to steal his unicity. So i tried some warpaint and it feels pretty good.
    https://s2.postimg.org/mpiih47xl/Sneak_Peek8.png

    Shaping up the grenade launcher:
    https://s24.postimg.org/fnckrpcth/Sneakpeek9.png

    Doing hands and feet properly. While working on them I thought that the warpaint wasnt enough to make him look unique when compared to other units. Enki shares a similar silhouette, Grybe's got similar hair and pretty much half of the Bad Lands units have goggles of some kind. So I removed them in favor of a more nifty visor/scouter, which fits the "technomancer" theme more properly while also giving him a unique portrait feeling. Oh, I also moved the weapons a bit over his head to give a better "remote control" feeling.
    https://s7.postimg.org/3wbkw2s2z/sneakpeek12.png

    Done with the grenade launcher, re-redone feet. Man, feet ARE hard.
    https://s28.postimg.org/j6ffylf5p/Sneak_Peek14.png

    Aaaand done with the final sketch. Next, the lineart!
    https://s13.postimg.org/nno619gtj/Sneakpeek16.png

    Lineart completed:
    https://s29.postimg.org/djtvvgohz/Sneakpeek17-2.png

    Likin this color scheme here :P
    https://s29.postimg.org/u6lib5hk7/Sneakpeek18-2.png
    https://s24.postimg.org/yt5nh4qc5/Sneakpeek20.png
    https://s17.postimg.org/i652po5kf/Sneakpeek21.png
    https://s17.postimg.org/j18ucp6of/sneakpeek23.png

    Splashed in some blue, warm colors are kinda tiring so some cold hues should relax the eye a bit.
    https://s10.postimg.org/cmhhmngc9/Sneakpeek24.png

    Rendering metallic surfaces is hard :\
    https://s9.postimg.org/o3g94vvpr/Sneakpeek27.png

    Almost done! Need to do the VFX:
    https://s23.postimg.org/stymdgc97/sneakpeek34.png
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  8. Paul51

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    Unit name: Rift Serpent Nidhogg :dream:
    World:
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    Artwork:
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    Lore: The fate of the worlds had been established eons ago, all worlds will collide and crush in the final battle, the Ragnarok, warriors from all dimensions will rise to challenge the fate, but the fate will come incarnated in Nidhogg, the brother of Yggdrasil, the dragon that will devour the heart of the sacred tree and will bring doom to every world.
    The serpent now sleeps, but one day, summoners will fall under his might.

    Notes*
    I know this artwork doesn`t fit too much with BF but this time I wanted to do something different, I was bored of the human-like designs, there are pretty good ones in that category

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  9. FantomX51

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    Unit name : Cataclysm Apex Kahakog (original name: Cataclysm's Monarch Kahakog)
    unit lore :
    he is the King of all the shapeshifter, he cans transform into a lion (animals-kings) and this is his lore ^^

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    English lore :
    Once he had dethroned Gilgamesh, he was undeniably the king of all ... but it was before realizing that the world populated by noblesses was not the only one within its reach.
    With the advent of the Rift Scholar, he was persecuted by the desire to reduce all forms of primitive life on the other side of the portal at his mercy.
    Thank’s to is other Shape, the Thunder Lion King, he was thinking that he could make it by is own, it was a mistake…
    Despite the fact that he did not like working as a team, he was forced to join the Apex, the only fighters who could reach him, in order to conquer Grand Gaia…

    French lore :
    Une fois qu'il eut détrôné Gilgamesh, il fut indéniablement le roi de tous... mais c’était avant de se rendre compte que le monde peuplé de Nobliers n’était pas le seul a sa portée.
    Avec la venu de l’érudit des failles, il fut pourchassé par l'envie de réduire toute forme de vie primitives de l'autre coté du portail a sa merci.
    Grace a sa forme animale, le Roi Lion de Foudre, il pensait pouvoir y arriver par ses propres moyens, ce fut une erreur…
    Malgré le fait qu'il n'aimait pas travailler en équipe, il fut contraint de rejoindre les Apex, les seuls combattants qui pouvaient l'atteindre, afin de conquérir Grande Gaia.

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    // Artwork //
    Very difficult to upload from phone without a nice connection but I did it !
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  10. Ylliana

    Ylliana [8] Elite

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    THis character has a very rich and complex story with its pack of references to myths, traditions, and of course with every BF EU exclusive world. I intended to write everything directly in the post. However I fell too short on time. As it would be too much of a writing for now, I deliver a summary instead of the full fledged story I initially wanted to tell here. If people really want it, I might possibly give the whole story in a subforum later.

    Energy Apex "The Rift"

    "The Rift" is actually the rift. The convergence dragged far more people in the rift than usual, and the echo of every souls from every worlds and every time began to make a conscience appear from these reminiscences directly in the energy of the whole rift. This conscience evolved into a superior individual with omnipresence, but without a physical body.
    By traveling in space and time, "The Rift" eventually took a body in the shapeshifters' world. So, yes, he's pretty much a vortex shapeshifter.
    He then traveled freely in space in time as en organic individual, gathering weapons and knowledge.

    He can summon himself, as he can be at different places and times at once. He can use the energy present in the rift, as he is the rift. He can use the chains holding the worlds too.

    You can see him as a superior being in which every world exists, and who decided to take a physical incarnation in all these worlds. He is the container, and the content at the same time. Isn't it a well known concept to every westerner ?

    Official entry:
    Contest - 2017-05-17 - Brave Frontier - Héros Apex _ 008_Final_bis2.jpg

    On this illustration we can see "The Rift" and two other iterations of himself. They hold a rifle from the Badlands, a Rapier from the Shapeshifters' world modified into a photon weapon in Neo Avalon, a hammer from Valhalla, and a bow. Yeah, just a bow.
    On the foreground we can see two chains summoned directly by "The Rift".
    And on the background, we can see a energy vortex form of "The Rift".

    If you ask yourself why the two emanations of "The Rift" on the back are not wearing clothes, it is intended. These emanations are other himself, other parts of him. "The Rift" is beyond any concept of Good or Evil. As such, I wanted to show him as a pure, immaculate being with some kind of divinity in him. That is why I decided to let the two emanations he uses be nude. You can think of the classical representation of the angels and everythings that are divine in nature, or the classical representations of a pure and immaculate being. For instance, you can look at The Creation of Adam, from Michelangelo.
    Anyway, that was a good way to feel the absolute necessity I have to start studying anatomy, because let's face it: I don't know it at all.

    The fact the two emanations are legless wasn't meant to be for censoring purpose, as there are plenty of ways to hide things without actually cutting legs. That's purely to evocate the fact that "The Rift" can travel as he wishes, and if only upper part is needed for a task, then why would he enter fully in this world ?

    For reference only. It's pretty rough, very incomplete, and inaccurate as some details would not stay as is in a final version. I just don't have enough time to write the whole story right now.

    I - Birth

    The Convergence had a very unexpeted result.
    Each time a traveler goes through the Rift, parts of his soul duplicate in the energy vortex as a sort of echo. Distant worlds from the Past, present, and future are in the Rift and coexist. The Convergence led far more people directly in the Rift than usual. Eventually, reminiscences of every souls started to make a conscience appear from the whole energy of the Rift. After a while, the Rift became a real being without a body, but with an omnipresence. Before long, "The Rift" began to ask itself questions:
    - What am I ? I am different from every living creature. Animals, Humans, Monsters, Demons, Gods. They all seem so limited compared to what I represent. Am I a person ? Am I alive ? Why nobody seems to be aware of my very existence ? They use me, they live in me, they live by me, but they don't know me. I want to understand. What am I ?

    "The Rift" started to think, and learn, as time passed... in every directions. It was able to learn backward, leading to the past, as well as spending years in a permanent present. "The Rift" was everywhere, everytime, since ever and for ever. That way, it made its conscience grow in an inimaginable way.

    Then, "The Rift" wanted to be. No longer as a conscience only, but as a full being. It searched a way to incarnate itself. The first step happened with the Shapeshifters. "The Rift" noticed how these beings were able to change their appearance. It knew the story of a certain Ninmah who became able to transform in an other being. It decided to concentrate its own energy to create a living vortex, a sort of seed of every existing vortex in the rift. Something that would be capable of communicate with physical entities. Taking a person's body was then a very easy task. It took the male body of a prince. "The Rift" was born as an organic individual.

    The prince's family noticed early that he fell victim of "something unknown". Quickly, everybody grew a fear of "The Rift". He was something new, something incomprehensible, and clearly something emanating a never seen before power. Every member of the family, and every villager, wanted to actually kill "The Rift", to feel safe again. He was unable to understand people's motive. Fear ? Safety ? Tears ? Vengeance ? Life and death ? All these concepts were alien to him.

    One night, the prince's own son, still just a child, decided to assassinate "The Rift", to free his father's soul, and save everyone. Well, that is what he thought he would do. He faced "The Rift", holding a dagger, trembling in fear and wrath. Suddenly, he ran into "The Rift", and plunged the blade in his father's body, killing "The Rift".

    "The Rift" learned two notions at once: death and killing. He didn't think anything special. He just walked back in time, a few minutes before his assassination. He then took a rapier on the wall, and waited for the Prince's son. When they faced each other for the second time, "The Rift" slayed his assassin before himself got killed.

    This dramatic event triggered a war. Everybody decided to kill "The Rift", before he might possibly want to kill them, just as he did with the Prince's young son.
    "The Rift" learned something again. It appeared that if he wanted to continue to live in a body, he would have to take any destructive power at his disposal.

    Despite the fact that "The Rift" was now in a physical body, he remained his capacity to travel in every place and every time at a glance. "The Rift" didn't have to use gates, portals, and vortex, as he was, himself, every gates altogether. Then began a journey in space and time, to harvest enough destructive power to protect his body.


    From this start, "The Rift" will get a lot of power. He will get a rifle in the badlands, and getting it will change the future of the people living there. He will transform his rapier into a photon rapier thanks to Neo Avalon technologies. He will get a famous hammer from Valhalla. He will summon the chains that hold the worlds in the rift to use it i battle. He will use multiple iterations of himself from different times at once.


    For the record, here are the earlier uploads I made.
    Here are the earlier uploads I made.
    Can't really show very first iterations as it's all on paper (where I feel more confortable by 2000% + 5% per remaining HP). Still, here are some experiments on a specific pose with some gesture and structure.
    Contest - 2017-05-17 - Brave Frontier - Héros Apex _ 001b.jpg

    I'm very unsatisfied with what I came up with so far.
    Anyway here is some WIP (I keep some elements of the sketch hidden yet to avoid spoiling about who the character will really be once finished.
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  11. JohrnyReport

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    Name:
    Genius Kimbra (5★)(Dark, in Omni Light)
    Race: Morokai
    Affilation: Azurai's Army, later Rihal'nase (hope i said that correctly)
    Role: Support/Attacker, which boost BB Attack, Atk, gives all elements buff and manages OD Fillrate. Also whipes debuffs away.

    Lore: Kimbra, also known by her kind as the "Deva of all Morokai" is famous for her brilliant mind and love for magic, an unusal trade for Morokais, that solve most of their problems with brute force. Her family murdered by follower of the Rihal'nase , so she has been told by Azurai, she joins forces with Azurai, to find her families killers. Evenso she is a magician by name, she fights on the frontlines with her trusty daggerstaff. Redicouled for her weapon of choice, she coldly replies: "Why use blunt, massive weapons, if a well aim Stab of dagger yields the same result".

    Her Evolutions would be:
    Strategist Kimbra (6★): She would now wear a cape, the staff got enhanced with magic jewels and the book looks worn. Her battle skill and ingenius mind let her rank up fast in the ranks.
    Warlord Kimbra (7★): Covered in scares, the dagger is now teethed, to show her increased brutality. Book is absolutly worn and her cloathing is dirty and ripped. Her eyes also have a glimpse of madness, consumed by her surge for revenge.
    Rihal'nase Kimbra (Omni): She finally figured out that Azurai ordered an Assasination on her family, to blindside her and make her his deciple. Feeling rumours for all the innocent she killed in the name of Azurai, she became part of the Rihal'nase to atone for her sins. She would have gotten rit of the cape and is replaced by angel wings. Also the dagger shines now in beautiful silver.

    By request i draw the Evolutions aswell. sta.sh/01ogvdd5f2fxo
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  12. Shigeru Shirozui

    Shigeru Shirozui [7] Hero

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    Think I can't finish this, I suck at coloring ahahaha

    Name: Chimera Apex Keane
    From the world of Shapeshifters. Can be categorized as an alternate, past or future timeline

    Lore:
    When Keane was young, he possessed a great resonance towards any animal he encounters. A researcher of the ancient art of Shapeshifting saw this and kidnapped him to test their years of research of reviving the art but ultimately failed. When Keane awoke, he saw what he became and his anguish caused his body to move on its own and decimate the entire laboratory. Upon exiting the laboratory, a mysterious magician appeared and applauded his work, persuading him to join his circus as his new attraction. Keane, realizing that he can’t return to his family, accepted the offer where he lived hiding behind a mask while pleasing people who comes.

    After several years, due to Keane’s loyalty, the magician fulfilled Keane's wish by giving him a potion to make him look normal for a limited time. Keane hurried to his former home to see his family but all he saw was a burned house and the graves of his family, vandalized. Filled with rage, he returned to the circus. He told everything to the magician. The magician just smiled as he offered him a part of his power to destroy his enemies. Without hesitation, Keane agreed, finally losing all his humanity. His physical form once again mutated his entire body, stronger than ever. He destroyed the entire village with this newfound power and turned any human into a failed shapeshifting monster, while the magician, gaining Keane’s humanity, watches from afar, laughing, praising himself for reaching a step closer to his goal.

    Keane was last heard muttering the words “Have I... truly avenged you... this way...?” before he disappeared.


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  13. eorodad

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    (Se è necessario inserire "apex" nel nome, la mia unità si chiamerà "Prima Apex Risurrezione")

    Nome:Prima Corruzione Rinata
    Storia: Dopo la battaglia contro Llewxam, una piccola parte della Corruzione riuscì a scappare attraverso un portale spazio-temporale. Attraversando il portale, la Corruzione arrivò dove tutto era iniziato, proprio lí, nel cimitero dove Geirdriful evocò l'incantesimo oscuro. Prima, valkiria della memoria, stava attraversando quella landa di tristezza quando la Corruzione la prese. Ora, potenziata dai portali, la Corruzione sta crescendo nel corpo di Prima, pronta per sconvolgere nuovamente l'universo.

    (Hoping it isn't necessary use "apex" in the name, in any case the namy will be changed in "Prima Apex Resurrection")
    Name: Prima Corruption Reborn
    Lore: After defeating in the battle against Llewxam, a small part of the corruption was able to escape in a space-time portal. Crossing the portal, corruption came where everything began, that is, in the cemetery where Geirdriful had summoned the dark spell. Prima, the valkirie of memory, was going through that land of sadness when corruption took her. Now, enhanced by portals, corruption is growing up in the body of Prima to revolt the universe again.
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  14. DoppiaQ

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    Nome Unità: Lemhstain Apex L'ammazzadraghi
    Lore ITA: - Leggenda tratta dealla biblioteca reale nel castello di Artù - Lemhstain era un prode cavaliere che dedicò la sua vita a proteggere villaggi e città dagli attacchi dei draghi. Le sue doti di combattimento erano eccezzionali tanto quanto la sua conoscenza dei draghi. Dopo anni di feroci battaglie, si rese conto che stava mutando in ciò che aveva combattuto fino a quel momento. Un giorno questo cavaliere svanì nel nulla senza essere mai più avvistato da nessuno. Fonti di origine popolare raccontano che anni dopo la sua scomparsa, in diverse città e villaggi venne avvistato un maestoso drago combattere altri dragi. Molti sostenevano che era Lemhstain, ma probabilmente si tratta solo di vaneggiamenti di poveri ubriachi.

    Unit Name: Dragonslayer Apex Lemhstain
    Lore ENG: Legend from the royal library in Arthur's castle - Lemhstain was a proud knight who devoted his life to protecting villages and cities from dragons attacks. His fighting skills were as great as his knowledge of dragons. After years of fierce battles, he realized that he was changing in what he had fought so far. One day, this knight vanished into nothingness without ever being spotted by anyone. Sources of popular origin tell that years after its disappearance, in a number of cities and villages a majestic dragon was spotted fighting other dragons. Many argued that it was Lemhstain, but it is probably just a scam of drunk drunkards.

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  15. El_Piguin

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    Unit name : Kirem

    Story : Kirem loved antiquity but also greatly appreciated technological advances. It was on the respect of culture and progress that he beat an empire to save his world from famine and poverty. However, another empire did not appreciate this news and declared war. For years the war was raging and the empire that Kirem had founded ended up besieged. In order to save the population, Kirem organized an ultimate plan to save the people. He helped the inhabitants to flee and attacked the enemy alone to reach the heart of the empire he had built. The enemies were numerous, but thanks to his powerful powers Kirem managed to reach the heart of his empire, where the key to the success of his plan lay. Indeed Kirem had built a system of self-destruction that only he could use. He took the enemy to death, along with his empire and his own life. But when Kirem awoke, he was no longer in his world. One must believe that his desire to surpass the universal laws allowed him to have a second chance, to lead his people to peace and prosperity. He then began his long journey through the worlds, enriching his knowledge and powers in order to find his own.

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    Name: Spiral Flame, Kai

    Description:
    The son of the knights who fought in the holy war against the gods, Quaid and Diana. A respected knight serving for Meirith. Having to inherit his father's moves and skills, he only gets to wield the wind from his father, as his natural element is fire. He got the eyes and the hair of his mother, Diana.
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  17. Poulpator

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    IG Name : Idamaria
    BF RPG World : The Shapeshifters' World
    Apex Hero Name : Venom Apex Esmeralda
    Element : Earth
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    Lore :

    Since as long as history can remember, the house of Sour Sands has always been an opportunist family. Only loyal when it was in their interest, they were known for their slyness, sneakiness and talent for assassination. Their power and influence was based on the fear they inspired to the other Noblesses' families.
    Of course, their younger heiress did not escape to this rule. The gracious Emeralda revealed herself to be one of the most talented assassin ever born in the family : she was agile, fast, swift, she never missed her target. But her main quality was her cold and pragmatic mind : she did not mind in whose back her dagger was stuck, only the reward was interesting.
    At the eve of the "Red Blood Revolution", she decided to ally with the humans, only because it was in her interest. She used her assassination skills to weaken the Noblesses, who then lost the war against the humans. But after the revolution, she realised that humans still saw her as a danger even though she helped them. Only a few shapeshifters were tolerated, and apparently she wasn't one of them. She eluded the beheading, but couldn't avoid the contemptuous looks and the withering rumors. After a failed assassination from a human fanatic, she vanished into thin air, deciding that this new world did not deserve the efforts she made to built it. No one ever saw her again, but stories say that if Esmeralda decided to get revenge, no one could escape her deadly daggers dance.
    Looking at her story, we can easily guess that what lost Esmeralada was her lack of emotions. Her closed and inscrutable face made her look like an ennemy, a traitor, and no one trusted her apart from her closest friends. Unfortunately, they were not many. She took enormous risks to help the human kind, risking her own life to save many. One could say that she only wanted to protect her own life frome the revolutionaries' wrath ; but without her help, the outcome of the revolution would likely had been very different. Maybe Esmeralda was not the pragmatic and cold-hearted assassin she pretended to be. Would she had shown her feelings more and been more passionate about her fight, she would have been seen like a loyal friend, maybe like a faithful leader. Accepted by both humans and shapeshifters, she would have never disappeared from this world, and would have been a great help for the rebuilding of the world's balance.
    Description of the unit :
    As already said, she is an assassin. She is very agile and swift and looks like she's dancing when she attacks, hence the "oriental dancer" look. She might look like she holding her daggers in the wrong way, but that's actually the way I want her to hold them -- even though it might be a bad idea, it's not a mistake. She can also transform herself into a snake (you would have never guessed that !) to poison her target, but not to smash them into a pulp like Cornelius do in his animation. She always stay elegant, she's not barbaric. She has a murderous look, she's not a smiley person. She show her love with hardness; a bit like Michelle would do I guess.
    Skillset ideas :
    I have no precise idea of her skillset, and it's not the purpose of the contest so here are just some general ideas to see what kind of units she could be.
    As she is a snake shapeshifter and the Venom Apex, she can inflict at least Poison to the enemies. She's also an assassin, so she should have a heavy Single Target attack somewhere in her kit (in addition to an AoE probably). But she's not just a nuker : she can deal a lot of damages but she's not the best damage dealer, because she also have some utility as a support unit (it could be defensive buffs or BB gauge buffs).
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    lore: (sorry for my english ^^'')

    ENG: Khrono directed the rifts and portals, he has a force widely superior than karna masta. He was the master of suicuL who he take him under his wing during a trip around the world of the mirrors. He taught to him all of his power, but during a war between gods, siucuL betrayed him and join the camp of the 10 gods because he feared the power of his master. Khrono fought all of his disciples, it was an incessant and devasting battle, the univers know a desaster marked by rifts now better know by the name ''vortex''. Before the 10 gods sealed him, he launched a curse in the world of the mirrors and gave his power left to sagraV


    FR: Khrono dirigeait les failles et les portails, il était d'une puissance largement supérieur à karna masta. Il fut le maître de siucuL qu'il avait prit sous son aile lors d'un voyage dans le monde des miroirs. Il lui avait tout appris de son pouvoir, mais lors d'une guerre de révolte des dieux, siucuL l'a trahit et rejoint le camp des 10 dieux car il craignait la puissance de son maître. Khrono a affronté ses disciples, ce fut un combat incessant et ravageur, l'univers connu un désastre marqué par des failles maintenant plus connu sous le nom de vortex. Avant que les 10 dieux puissent réussir a le scellé, il lança une malédiction dans le monde des miroirs et donna sa puissance restante a sagraV.


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  20. Squall Flamme

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    Player name: Alexander
    BF World : Valhalla
    Apex name : Glorious apex Squall (Apex glorieux Squall)
    Lore (english):
    Squall, a fighter of Valhalla, has always been belittled by the gods because even if it possesses a great power it will never be one. Having been close to Skamold, she gave to him a quest to defeat Sól, goddess personifying the sun and nídhögg, Apocalyptic dragon abiding under the world tree. It is armed with the legendary blade Balmung that it abbat its two preys and which at the same time takes possession of their power. Back in front of the gods, it thanks Skamold and proves to them That he does not need to be a god to slay them.
    (French):
    Squall, un combattant du Valhalla ,a toujours été rabaissé par les dieux car même si il possède un grand pouvoir il n'en seras jamais un .Ayant été proche de Skamold, elle lui donna comme quête de terrasser Sól, déesse personnifiant le soleil et nídhögg, dragon apocalyptique demeurant sous l'arbre monde .C'est armé de la lame légendaire Balmung qu'il abbat ses deux proies et qui par la même occasion prend possession de leur pouvoirs.De retour face aux dieux,il remercie Skamold et prouve à ces derniers qu'il n'a pas besoin d'être un dieu pour les pourfendre."
    Element : fire
    Unit type : damage - mitigeur

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