[Community Contest] Grand Tournament - Writing Contest (Lore/Fanfiction)

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    Welcome Summoners!


    Today it is time for a new event as part of our wonderful Anniversary Celebrations!
    Since we have already noticed that there are many artists playing the game, we've decided to see how creative you guys can be with words! Time to put down the pencils and pick up the pens! Can you come up with some good puns? Are you witty enough? Can you write something creative?

    It is time for a long awaited writing contest!

    For this contest you'll have to write a Fanfiction or Lore about your favorite EU-Exclusive Unit(s)! Seeing that these contests surround our beloved (and sometimes not so beloved) Brave Fontier RPG's second Anniversary, we thought it would be a great idea to look back at all the different Exclusives our server has been introduced to over the past two years.

    What do we want you to write?

    Something funny, punny, witty, ... You can also choose to go for a more serious mood! We just want you to be creative! An alternate universe where our heroes go on a completely different adventure, a new background story or maybe even a continuation of existing lore? The choice is completely yours! However it is important that your entry is original and completely yours! That's because we're looking for creativity and fairness with this little contest.

    Important: Do not confuse this contest with the Poetry contest!! There is another contest going on where you can write smaller poetry instead, but this contest requires you to create a creative lore or fanfiction! Find the other contest over here (http://forum.bravefrontier-rpg.com/threads/community-contest-grand-tournament-poetry-contest.108207/)

    Rules:
    • The contest is open for entries until 22:00 CEST 27-6-2016
    • Only 1 entry per Summoner allowed
    • You need to enter your Ingame Name & Summoner ID in your post
    • Once you've made your entry you cannot edit that post or we'll see it as cheating!
    • Be creative and think out of the box! ^^
    • You are allowed to write in English only to be eligible! However, if you wish to write in another language, you have to put an English translation below your piece to enter in the competition.
    How will the winners be chosen?
    • When the deadline has been reached, all players will be able to vote for their favorite entries! Out of all the votes, the most popular 3 entries will receive a fantastic reward! When voting, pick your personal TOP 3 Entries, and make sure to leave your User ID so we can enter your name in the Lottery! Details about how to vote will be communicated later.
    • All voters for the Top 3 Community Picks will automatically be entered in a lottery! More information about this near the end of the contest!
    Rewards:
    • First Place: 1 Zodiacs Unit of Choice, 3 Gems, 1 Mystery Frog, 1 Trident Key, 1 Imp Arton - And TWO points on the Grand Leaderboard!
    • Second Place: 2 Gems, 1 Mystery Frog, 1 Trident Key, 1 Burst Emperor - And ONE point on the Grand Leaderboard!
    • Third Place: 1 Gem, 1 Mystery Frog, 1 Trident Key, 1 Golden God - And ONE point on the Grand Leaderboard!

    ^^ Have a good time, and make something beautiful out of your entry!

    Good luck, Summoners!
    ~Gholy
    The United Tomato Crew
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    Write in english for a french :sigh::laughing: hard #bad traduction
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    Yay, a thing that i can do :grin:
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    do we have to post our entry here?
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    Yes!
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    Yes this is allowed :) If it is 1 story then it is fine! The only thing that shouldnt be done is like... a Random story about Blink and then suddenly a new entry with a random story about Viviane. If it is 1 entry and 1 story it is fine, but multiple different stories are not the point of this contest ^^
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    Part 1 - Awakening



    After an indefinite thousand of years after fusing with the portals, Llewxam woke up.

    She felt a measureless amount of power flowing inside her, to the point that she was able to feel other people feelings.

    She could live other people lives.

    The loss of a precious sister, the death of one’s love, the bloodlust of an animal.

    An innumerable amount of pain was flowing inside her heart, so many innocent lives perished by the hand of the Gods.


    She knew that she had to do something..

    She knew that she didn’t gain that tremendous power for nothing..


    Llewxam decided to look inside the memories of a hero of the past Grand Gaia to fully understand why would the Gods plan to destroy the humanity after Centuries of peace; she saw something absurd.

    An old man was controlling the divine beings from the shadows, almost like a puppeteer..

    But he wasn’t the root of al the suffering, instead, he seemed to be a vessel, a puppet. A puppeteer being a puppet of another puppeteer.


    Something monstrous was about to strike down on the present Grand Gaia, something that like her, was from another world.


    Looking back into the past memories of every single person, Llewxam noticed a giant tree from the eyes of a warrior of the dark arts.

    At the sight of this dark creature, she returned back to her own body.. The Tree rejected her from Geirdriful’s body.


    Llewxam understood what was happening. What the Tree did was a body manipulation, a manipulation made through Corruption, the ugliest matter that existed since the beginning of Time.


    She had to stop the evil doings of the Corrupted Tree.


    To counter the manifestation of the Corruption, she began to spread Purity, giving part of her infinite power to the strongest heroes, holders of the purest hearts, with the help of an old friend who fought with her during Sagrav’s tyranny.


    Llewxam and Arbez were ready to fight.





    Part 2 - Heroes and Puppets



    To spread the Corruption and Purity, both the divine beings needed to use something to distribute the unlimited amount of power to their chosen champions.


    They found the perfect catalyst: the Constellations.


    They searched for the strongest vessels, travelling through worlds, one with the intention of dropping the universes in a state of chaos and disorder, an entropy of disgusting size.

    The other wanted to keep the balance of the universes, she wanted to save humans and gods from this evil scheme, and maybe, she would have saved the Corrupted Tree too from the dark matter.


    The Tree’s puppets were decided:


    a tyrant ruler of spiders, with the interest of world domination.

    A warrior of the dark arts, with a broken heart and a rotten mind.

    A young survivor, who chose to destroy to escape from her loneliness.

    A woman who fought a battle that seemed to be endless, dying after dealing her last strike to an opponent that was on the same situation.

    A former disciple that let herself consume from a power that was out of her reach.

    A count who was controlled by a cruel mantis by a spell.


    Llewxam chose her warriors too:


    an axe wielder who was saying her last goodbyes to her friends that were beyond saving.

    A girl who wanted to fight the gods for the sake of humanity.

    A princess that cared only for her little sister.

    A mechanical warrior born to fight the Gods,

    A Sealing Master who sought for the purification of the world.

    A Legendary Thief who stole from the riches, to help the poor and the weak.


    12 Constellations were ready to channel the energy to the vessels


    Pisces, Aquarius, Leo, Capricorn and Aries were flowing with Corruption.


    Cancer, Virgo, Libra, Sagittarius, Taurus and Scorpio were blessed by a pure light.


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    love it!
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    4*
    the young person hero joined the divine army to overcome Sagrav. At the time of the training, Sotnarg met Suicul and Etudrev. Suicul was a warrior who aimed to kill Sagrav and Etudrev, was to him the leader of this army. At the time of the battle, much of warrior died

    5*
    Sotnarg then proposed in Suicul to follow It: Sotnarg created the alliance of the gods. After two years of research, alliance was finally to finish: it joined together Sotnarg, Tuanregguj, Aymarks, Llewxam, Arbez and Suicul. Arbez used its Magic to multiply by ten the power of the heroes and Tuanregguj forged new army and armours for the warrior: They back up fine loan.

    6*
    Llewxam and Sotnarg discussed at the time travels it to overcome Sagrav: Sotnarg had to notice that Suicul sank in chaos and corruption since its defeat against Sagrav. At the time of the battle, Sagrav called upon the evil versions of the heroes. The engagements started: Sotnarg against Grantos, Llewxam against Maxwell, Aymarks against Skramya and Suicul against Lucius. All the hero succeeded in killing the enemy gods. Suicul sealed Lucius and separated It in five parts separate.

    7*
    After having killed the evil versions, the heroes acquire a whole a divine power, the battle lasted three days. Unfortunately, Aymarks, Arbez and Tuanregguj died their wounds. Sagrav died in its turn. After the great battle, Sotnarg and Llewxam left in search of Suicul which disappeared at the time of battle. End!!!


    French version:

    Sotnarg

    4*
    Le jeune heros rejoigna l'armée divine pour vaincre Sagrav. Lors de l'entrainement, Sotnarg rencontra Suicul et Etudrev. Suicul etait aussi un guerrier voulent tuer Sagrav et Etudrev, lui, etait Le meneur de cette armée. Lors de la bataille, beaucoup de guerrier moururent

    5*
    Sotnarg proposa alors à Suicul de Le suivre: Sotnarg créa l'alliance des dieux. Apres deux ans de recherche, l'alliance fut enfin terminer: elle reunissait Sotnarg, Ruetcurtsed, Aymarks, Llewxam, Arbez et Suicul. Arbez utilisa sa Magie pour décupler la puissance des heros et Ruetcurtsed forgea des nouvelles armée et armures pour les guerrier: Ils etaient fin pret.

    6*
    Llewxam et Sotnarg discutairent lors du voyage pour vaincre Sagrav: Sotnarg avait remarquer que Suicul sombrait dans Le chaos et la corruption depuis sa defaite contre Sagrav. Lors du combat, Sagrav invoqua les versions maléfiques des heros. Les combats commençairent: Sotnarg contre Grantos, Llewxam contre Maxwell, Aymarks contre Skramya et Suicul contre Lucius. Tout les heros réussirent à tuer les dieux énemis. Suicul scèlla Lucius et Le séppara en cinq partis distincte.

    7
    Apres avoir tuer les versions maléfiques, les heros aquérirent tous une puissance divine, Le combat dura trois jours. Malheureusement, Aymarks, Arbez et Ruetcurtsed moururent de leurs blessures. Sagrav sucombat à son tour. Apres la grande bataille, Sotnarg et Llewxam partirent à la recherche de Suicul qui disparut lors de la bataille contre Sagrav...
    Fin !!!

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    It’s been five years since Arthur died and Percival started rebuilding the kingdom. Merlin was at the graveyard and looked at the grave of Mordred: “Even though you died, Mordred, you helped me a lot and that’s why, I offer you my gratitude. Your dead will not have been worthless.”


    One day the Herald of Yggdrasil woke up, changed... corrupted. She felt the overwhelming urge to destroy. Slowly she led the corruption upon the rifts, consuming and corrupting the goddesses of Valhalla, until all of the rifts have been consumed and the Herald was satisfied and long time, it rested so.

    But then she became aware of other world and she desired to destroy those. She started by corrupting the gods and as the gods declared war against humanity, she returned to the Rifts and felt satisfied.


    During the war of gods and humans, Llewxam full of sadness as people died and towns were destroyed, but she knew she couldn’t intervene, as she did not have the power to fight all the gods and she sensed that there was something bigger behind all of this and thus she waited and wept for the fallen.


    Years later, the Herald returned and she saw, that there were (still) living humans and that there again standing towns and civilizations and she wanted to crush them all.

    She summoned six mighty heroes and corrupted them with the power of Zodiacs and send them on a rampage.


    As the Herald returned, Llewxam knew she had to do something and so she too summoned six mighty heroes and enhanced them with the power of the Zodiacs and send them to fight against the Heralds champions, while she fought her way through the corrupted Rifts to the Herald.


    She and the Herald fought a long and fierce battle and in the end Llewxam won and the Herald died.

    Llewxam fell to the ground exhausted but… as it turned out… it wasn’t over.

    Behind Yggdrasil a dark figure emerged: Merlin.


    Merlin has been the one behind the corruption, he experimented on Mordred and turned him against his father and then years later corrupted the Herald and sealed the world-tree Yggdrasil (as Yggdrasil is the true master behind the Herald and had to be sealed in order to corrupt the Herald), in hopes to destroy all worlds.

    But Llewxam prevent this from happening and thus Merlin was angry. He attacked Llewxam and Llewxam desperately tried to fight back. But it was no use: She had used up almost all her power in her fight against the Herald. Merlin threw her at Yggdrasil and prepared himself to kill Llewxam and attacked.

    Llewxam lied there, blood running down her body and with her last bit of energy, she freed the spirit Yggdrasil and then… she vanished from existence.


    Merlin watched in horror as the spirit Yggdrasil slowly began to manifest itself and then Yggdrasil spoke: “You who dared to trick and sealed me, you who brought corruption to the worlds, you who are responsible for the death of so many peoples, you must be PUNISHED?”

    Yggdrasil’s spirit finished manifested and then with a big “khyaaa” Mandragora (Yggdrasil’s physical form) sent Merlin into non-existence.


    Mandragora then turned back into the giant world-tree and freedom returned, as the corruption was finally defeated.

    Keep in mind that the "Herald of Yggdrasil" is NOT = "Yggdrasil"
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    And again I forgot to add my IGN and ID (even though its just my forum name and the ID is written under my Avatar but whatever) so:
    IGN: Raziel
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    (and I had to make this post since I was not allowed to edit the post with the entry sooo... just keep that in mind :P)
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    @Gholayat
    okay, i just have one question :
    can i post my storie in french and ask for a translation ?
    because i m not good enough in english, and i think it's realy unfair to make a contest where english section is clearly advantaged
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    You could say the same about the contests that are just in French, any other langauge is not able to participate at all! Sorry, but your entry needs an English translation if you want to be eligible for the rewards. You could ask someone on the forum before you post your entry to help with a translation though!
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    Aaaaaaaa :eek: @Gholayat is it still good that i put my IGN and ID here? If not, can you put them in for me? As long as i remember is not cheating if done by a mod :eek: else i will just repost...

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    Just one question : can we participate to the poetry and lore contest at the same time?
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